Critique of Progress so far

We have been working on combing our audio with our animatic and playing around with timing and sound effects and what they achieve. What we took away from our critique was that we needed to make our animations less static, as there was potential to seperate more layers and animate more. Also to more strategically use cutting to create suspense and tension where we wanted it. This is still a working progress, but we are enjoying playing around will different things and their effects. We have also realised having background music doesnt really fit with our animation and just having sound effects is a lot more effective.

We have also been working on our website, experimenting and working things out as we go. The feedback we got from our website in progress was that we need to make sure that all of the elements of our website relate to one another and all tie into our aesthetic. We want to make our website easy to navigate and read, but also make it visually engaging and relate to our animation. Since we are both new to HTML and CSS, we want to keep it fairly simple, which we hope will also be empathetic to the users of our website. Here is what our website looks like so far.

We have added in some textures for the background of our video and main content. There have also been some adjustments made like aligning particular elements, adding padding and margins to areas, all contributing to making the site cleaner. We still need to adjust bits a pieces like, titles and borders etc. The main thing now is adding our content.